In Case I go There
My first real critique, found on deviantart.
This is very touching. I have a 14 year old lab that looks a lot like the one on the right. For the most part, they actually look real!
A few things that needs work on though, is the thickness of the neck on the black one, the eyebrows on the brown one, and the nose need to be a bit bigger on the brown one, too. The neck cold be a bit smaller, and the eyebrows could be a bit thinner, even though I understand some labs have very bushy eyebrows.
You nailed the oiliness of the coats right on. Older labs tend to be very silky, and I love the way you included that into the drawing. This definitely evens out the good and bad for me, and I think it will for others, too.
Keep up the good work. I hope to see more like this.
A few things that needs work on though, is the thickness of the neck on the black one, the eyebrows on the brown one, and the nose need to be a bit bigger on the brown one, too. The neck cold be a bit smaller, and the eyebrows could be a bit thinner, even though I understand some labs have very bushy eyebrows.
You nailed the oiliness of the coats right on. Older labs tend to be very silky, and I love the way you included that into the drawing. This definitely evens out the good and bad for me, and I think it will for others, too.
Keep up the good work. I hope to see more like this.
I appreciate!! I think it's awesome someone took the time to look at my drawing and really tell me what they thought.
I'm ready for summer to be over.
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